Sunday, January 11, 2009

Toulmin's Model of Argument

It is apparent that the past decade has called for new degrees of protection for high school students. Instances in history such as Columbine have made this evident. High schools such as my own have made an attempt at protecting our students by placing a tag upon the masses. Theoretically, no individual can enter and stay within the walls of High Point Regional High School without wearing an ID card around their necks. Despite the administrations best efforts, this tactic has been proven unsuccessful. This arbitrary approach to protect high school students is clearly ineffectual. Hence, students at High Point High School should not have to wear Ids.

Despite the school's hopes that the usage of IDs will protect us from those lurking on the outside peering into our school, the plastic cards of safety are unnecessary. The rules are blatantly defied every day. Seniors entering the school through the side doors are meant to have IDs displayed upon entering the building, but these rules have never been enforced. Even worse, there has never been an arbitrary rule marking the front door: the easiest way to walk into the school, where the masses enter from the buses. Any individual could easily waltz right into the school with a gun or a bomb, making IDs again, faulty.

Aside from the fact that most individuals can make it through an entire day without wearing an ID at all, it is common for students to borrow a copy of another student's ID and wear it in place of their own. Since no teacher or administrator actually checks what is displayed on the ID, this is easy. And as I did for the majority of the year, it is also possible to display between one half and three quarters of an ID, without a name or a face on it. Teachers and administrators accept this as a form of identification. Despite the underlying idea of keeping the students safe from intrusion during school hours, the enforcement of IDs is somewhat lackadaisical. This is especially true since the IDs server no purpose such as they would in a college setting: allowing students to enter certain rooms or buy meals. IDs at High Point Regional are meant only to be worn around the neck.

Lastly, it is also important to make note of the places in which wearing an ID have been made most important: mostly, just the lunch room. The cafeteria is the only place in the entirety of the school where I personally have been asked to put on my ID. This is simply because (as many teachers in cafeteria duty have proclaimed) so the teachers observing the students eat lunch do not suffer repercussions from the administrators. It is in this instance that IDs have been proven to actually be destructive. Because students are forced to wear the ID cards around their necks while eating, disasters have happened, such as jerseys destroyed because an ID card snuck its way into a pile of ketchup. Hence, it is clear that IDs are not only useless, but they actually have a negative affect as well.

Although High Schools should be making an attempt at protecting all students at the school with a universal tool, it is obvious that ID cards are ineffective. The rule that states IDs need to be worn at all times is arbitrary at best, as so easily avoided. Not only are these ID cards unnecessary, there are also cases in which they are harmful, having a negative affect. In short, students at High Point Regional High School should not have to wear IDs.